The impalpable passing of time
The intangible sailing of life
Make you realize you live
in abstractions
Although surrounded by the concrete
And you understand
That concrete might be visible
But it's the abstract that touches
You more deeply
That strikes you harder.
Philosophy expressed in brilliant creative form. Love the poem, Nosheen!
The intrigues of life and the enigma that is time are very interestingly captured in the poem. As the ultimate Indian philosophy states, "what you see is not what exists. And what really exists, you would not see at all"… good poem, Nosheen
Beautiful work! A wonderful contemplation of existence. Top marks!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful and perceptive thoughts to ponder about. A poem of great insight! The last three lines are so true.. Top Marks as always.