Accelerate Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
Accelerate
Mind and body, you accelerate
With belief to give you powers, great
That you can influence your own fate
To brighten your natural state
That is so enabled to skate.
The mind with vigour is the gate
To the heaven you can create.
But that impatience is the bait,
The very great passion you hate
That tempts you to quit and not wait.
Faith, bright to have, you can inflate.
Your very faith, you must update.
Faith, bright to have, you can inflate. Your very faith, you must update. ----- great rhymes and rhythm...well crafted with nice theme...10
accelerate, great, fate, the author had a good search for rhymes, excellent collection of high sounding vocabularies, verily, verily the lines are in deep thoughts.Lots of thinking I should say.
Undaunted ‘Self Confidence’ can make mountain to walk on to you…Yeah its our ‘Choice’ [not chance] to shape/configure us…this [poetry] generates much acceleration… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 [Heart felt - hf]
Fate; future; accelerate - fantastic. Impatience gets in the way, rescued by faith needing inflation, upliftment. Salvation and success, then acceleration. And the rhymes make me dance! A great message here, Obinna. Enjoyed this a lot.
A very inspiring message expressed in your verse, Obinna..As always, perfect rhythm and flow. Thanks for sharing with us. Yelena M.
Yes, mind can do miracles, if only it constantly guards against distractions like impatience and hatred, and is driven by an abiding faith in the Divine. Thank you for the positive message.
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I would like to translate this poem
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