Accident - Ατύχημα Poem by Kostas Lagos

Accident - Ατύχημα

Rating: 4.8


Handsome man from Stuttgart

Talking straight to her heart

He made her a dinner

Tasty meat with ginger

Ruined by the smell of his fart





Ομορφάντρας από τα Χανιά

Σαν να της μιλούσε στη καρδιά

Ετοίμασε το βραδινό

Καρυκευμένο βοδινό

Μια κλανιά, του έκανε ζημιά

Thursday, January 21, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: dinner,humor,date
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 January 2021

Amazingly humorous limerick. Unfortunate incident but what matters is his true and loving heart. Cleverly crafted

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Anjandev Roy 21 January 2021

Well written.....like it...thank u, dear poet.

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Varsha M 22 January 2021

You just can't live without jokes isn't it. I'll edit a bit just for fun....hope you don't mind.

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Suzon Albert 22 January 2021

Just accident. Not in fate to have her love.

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2021

The twist in the end took it to a different level and converted a proposal into limerick, Smart thinking Friend.10**

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2021

Cutest crystal clear limerick, dear poet! To my favourites and 5 stars for you. I have enjoyed very much!

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Varsha M 22 January 2021

And all five fingers in bowl, head bowed down and glued, as if nothing else viewed, your startled look made no difference indeed, for meat was yummy indeed.

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Varsha M 22 January 2021

Handsome man from Stuttgart Talking straight to her heart He made her a dinner Tasty meat with ginger which she licked like a kid, for it tasted yummy indeed....

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