Across the field I once did stare
Towards the woodland stark and bare
I felt the cold of autumn air
While leaves lay on the ground.
The early morning was so still
As sunlight rose above the hill
And warmed the bitter, morning chill
But could not warm my heart.
The sky was of the deepest blue
The frost was melting into dew
And I remember clearly too
Just how I felt that day.
But now that day has long since gone
I missed my chance to be someone
I wish for once that luck had shone
On me and brought me love.
Your poem is very touching and true. Its very beautiful. Keep writing!
you are awesome..your poems are beautifully written....i enjoy reading them
Love...happens often when we least expect it, , though sometimes if we know where to look we can venture forward in it's light A great poem Andrew Love duncan X
This is a beautiful, well-crafted poem. I like the feeling and image that it captures about a melancholy memory. Keep up the great work. I also invite you to read and comment.
A beatufull poem well written that captures the feeling of someone looking back.
This is a beautiful poem I would like to request you to read my poem a favorite cousin and leave your kind comments Thank You
Good rhyming throughout the poem and a good picture of the sun rising from the horizon.
Andrew, very sad and emotional write gently penned with mother nature comparing fall with being such a sad time of year especially if you have experienced or about to a loss.... Very touching with much imagery.....Bonnie
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great write Andrew! Enjoyed reading this poem! ! Keep inking them! ! (10) ! ! Thad