Action And Reaction? Poem by N N P Parameswaran(Nasarudheen.P)

Action And Reaction?

Rating: 4.7


As confluence we gushed
Demolishing either banks
residual deltas
cleave our course forever, but-
In the same Ocean we merge.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Action in life and inevitable reaction
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 21 June 2013

very meaningful poem, it has many insuniation, i like it

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 June 2013

Versed in beautiful brevity - a great truth!

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Valsa George 22 June 2013

Cleaving streams finally have to merge with the Ocean! An undeniable truth beautifully stated!

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Issa Haikai 22 June 2013

very good! the beauty i like of this truth

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Dave Walker 22 June 2013

A great poem, short and sweet.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 April 2018

but- In the same Ocean we merge. yes dear poet. in the same ocean.. every action has an equal and opposite reaction.. thank u dear. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2016

In physics! Action And Reaction are opposite and equal; however, let us put things right on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chinedu Dike 02 February 2015

The poem reminds me of the meeting point of River Niger and River Benue at Lokoja in Nigeria. It's a nice piece of poetry written with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Danny Draper 27 June 2013

In flood and inundation there is connection and merging, good concepts considered here.

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Valerie Dohren 26 June 2013

We emerge from the ocean and we shall return to the ocean - well penned.

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