Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

Gold Star - 6,108 Points (8.8.1952 / Manakad)

Action And Reaction? - Poem by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

As confluence we gushed
Demolishing either banks
residual deltas
cleave our course forever, but-
In the same Ocean we merge.


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Action in life and inevitable reaction

Comments about Action And Reaction? by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/2/2018 4:13:00 PM)


    but-
    In the same Ocean we merge. yes dear poet. in the same ocean.. every action has an equal and opposite reaction.. thank u dear. tony
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/19/2016 1:13:00 AM)


    In physics! Action And Reaction are opposite and equal; however, let us put things right on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (2/2/2015 1:54:00 AM)


    The poem reminds me of the meeting point of River Niger and River Benue at Lokoja in Nigeria. It's a nice piece of poetry written with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER. (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2013 2:50:00 AM)


    In flood and inundation there is connection and merging, good concepts considered here. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (6/26/2013 2:46:00 PM)


    We emerge from the ocean and we shall return to the ocean - well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 9:19:00 AM)


    Action and reaction? by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran is a deep poem as far as the meaning is concerned
    Delta that divides the rivers yet they merge in one ocean...Me think what faith you have you have to face death and resurrected.only one is accountable of his/her deeds...this is the deep ocean why we keep commotion...better correct oneself before go go
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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 9:19:00 AM)


    Action and reaction? by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran is a deep poem as far as the meaning is concerned
    Delta that divides the rivers yet they merge in one ocean...Me think what faith you have you have to face death and resurrected.only one is accountable of his/her deeds...this is the deep ocean why we keep commotion...better correct oneself before go go
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2013 7:28:00 AM)


    Nice poem, well composed! (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2013 12:22:00 PM)


    A great poem, short and sweet. (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2013 7:43:00 AM)


    very good!
    the beauty i like of
    this truth
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  • Valsa George (6/22/2013 6:10:00 AM)


    Cleaving streams finally have to merge with the Ocean! An undeniable truth beautifully stated! (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2013 3:59:00 AM)


    Versed in beautiful brevity - a great truth! (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (6/21/2013 10:40:00 AM)


    very meaningful poem, it has many insuniation, i like it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013


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