Additional Mind Poem by ramesh rai

Additional Mind

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A creative mind is only single minded
a destructive mind has multi aspects
a creative mind is normal mind
bestowed with every one, but a person
having extra mind always resolute destruction

Ravana, the demon had ten minds
always fought for mischievous action

No worry friends if you have no extra mind
you are worthy to make fruitful action
where rose will bloom every day and
you will lead the world for better situation.

Friday, October 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Skati 03 October 2014

It's a wonderful poem that shows our truth. Thanks.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 05 October 2014

A creative mind is single minded, but you are worthy to make fruitful action. Beautiful poem that awakes the soul with billions of hopes and smiles. Well done Rai sir.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

A Beautiful advice in few lines....... No worry friends if you have no extra mind you are worthy to make fruitful action

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Salini Nair 12 October 2014

a person having extra mind always resolute destruction...............nice sir

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Savita Tyagi 11 October 2014

Single mind is the most cherished quality. Very enjoyable poem.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 October 2014

Lovely ending.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 October 2014

So true, a double minded driver is always responsible for the accidents and consequent destruction.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 October 2014

Additional mind is a source of confusion and a workshop for devilish thoughts. In the modern world there is plenty of additional memory available from the computer brain. Beautiful poem that says it all.

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