Adhura Pyar - Half Love Comments

Adha hai chandrama raat aadhi aur reh gayi hamari kahani aadhi

extraordinary skills, creative work of Asim....Superb.

Romantic love is never complete that's we live with it in all our life. Thank you for sharing.

True love is not understood is so sad. This well structured wisely drafted poem definitely. Interesting.10

Simply incredible Asim! The manner in which each line becomes smaller is a wonderful act. I love this poem from you. Pyaar adhura rahe to dard ho ta hai, par adhura pyaar bhi to pyaar hi hota hai.. Sukhriya :)

Humaari adhoori kahaani.... we all have an incomplete love in our life. well expressed.10

Umra kam hoti hai adhure pyar ki Shuru se shuru karo to banegi kahani mukammal pyar ki....... bahut acchi ghazal hai....loved it....thank you for sharing :)

very beautiful expression of sentiments....every one of the three love stories has this fate....