M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,358 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Adhura Pyar - Half Love - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Unhe kadr kahan hamare pray ki
Hamein fursat kahan is baat ki
Ke hum unhe yakeen dilate
Ki wo kya hain hamare
Ye jaan paate
Bus reh gaya
Yeh banke
Ek afsana

Topic(s) of this poem: half, love

Form: Ghazal

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Half Love

She did not understand my true love
I did not express my true feelings
as to what she is to me in life
she did not open up to me
nor I did tell her
and it remained
half love

Comments about Adhura Pyar - Half Love by M. Asim Nehal

  • (2/2/2016 9:38:00 AM)

    extraordinary skills, creative work of Asim....Superb. (Report) Reply

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  • Abderrahmane Dakir (1/26/2016 4:58:00 AM)

    Romantic love is never complete that's we live with it in all our life. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/25/2016 1:18:00 PM)

    True love is not understood is so sad. This well structured wisely drafted poem definitely. Interesting.10 (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (1/24/2016 10:36:00 PM)

    Simply incredible Asim! The manner in which each line becomes smaller is a wonderful act. I love this poem from you. Pyaar adhura rahe to dard ho ta hai, par adhura pyaar bhi to pyaar hi hota hai.. Sukhriya :) (Report) Reply

  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/23/2016 12:36:00 PM)

    Humaari adhoori kahaani.... we all have an incomplete love in our life. well expressed.10 (Report) Reply

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/23/2016 8:03:00 AM)

    Umra kam hoti hai adhure pyar ki
    Shuru se shuru karo to banegi kahani mukammal pyar ki....... bahut acchi ghazal hai....loved it....thank you for sharing :)
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  • Muhammad Imtiyaz (1/23/2016 7:41:00 AM)

    very beautiful expression of sentiments....every one of the three love stories has this fate.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 23, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 23, 2016

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