<≪≪≪admirable Creature≫≫≫≫ Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

<≪≪≪admirable Creature≫≫≫≫

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I.
Thy eyes shine, comely; O Rose,
Thou art mine, love me!
By heart and soul and be close
Before I sleep in my sea.
II.
Lenient are my beams,
Caressing thy rubious shores
And thy redolent dreams
Dwell in thine heart doors.
III.
'Be not silent to me'!
Unto the throbs of heart.
Never depart!
From their songs of glee.
IV.
Let thy love, sempervirent;
Be blossomed as reverent,
Over my green pasture:
As thou art an admirable creature!
V.
Be of good courage!
'O' beloved, in my love
For I shall never cage
Thy wings, O my mate-dove.

Sunday, November 27, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kenebo Rajkumar 11 May 2012

so soft and romantic...........

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Rigzin Namgyal 08 May 2012

..an admirable poem..loved it...

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im speechless my friend......simply amazing piece of poetry...

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Neela Nath Das 14 April 2012

Marvelous poem.Praiseworthy write!

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Dave Walker 07 January 2012

A so very beautiful poem. A great poem.

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Wahab Abdul 05 November 2013

extraordinary poem, vipin, carry on.. i enjoyed reading your poem....

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 September 2013

Wow.wonderful poem...Each lines to romantically penned. Loved reading it.

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Anita Sehgal 27 December 2012

lovely, beautiful epression..

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Valsa George 03 December 2012

A very emotive write! Beautiful images!

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Neela Nath Das 12 June 2012

Well rhymed, romantic poem.Really awesome.

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