Adoration Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Adoration

Rating: 4.8


Don’t look back
at me
Every time
you did that
my heart
jumping
up and down
I wish
I could live forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shimon Weinroth 28 October 2008

Don't we all, alas mortality is our finite nostalgia, your minimalistic poetry as always food for thought

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Sally Sh. 07 June 2008

Adoration..such a thin line between adoration and love. i need to learn how not to cross that line..coz iam only allowed to feel adoration not love but how can i learn not to cross it when i cant find it...i wish i could live forever trying to find that line..thnx

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Catherine Rica Cosico 02 June 2008

If the feeling is mutual...Adoring the one who adores you too...loving a person who loves you back...WOW! ! ! thats pleasure and delight, whilts annoyance If the feeling is odd...

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