Afresh Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Afresh

Rating: 4.0


Devotion to you
Is all I know
Don’t give me
Your smiles
Give me
Your saliva
Don’t give me
Your hug
Give me
Your crushes
Don’t give me
Your stares
Give me
Your naked flesh
Love stays
Afresh

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
O Anna Niemus 08 June 2008

Would not Allah say that such thoughts are better left sacred and private

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Sanjay Pandian 01 June 2008

Quite naugthy stuff, Sulaiman. I am lovin' it.A 10 for you. Take care.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 01 June 2008

When love stays afresh with flesh...after the taste gone the love and never be refreshed...unless the love is bless and destined through eternity.

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Alison Cassidy 31 May 2008

Passion with balls. A succinctly penned passionate account of the meat and gravy of a relationship. Great poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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