Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 207 Points (Singapore)

An Epilogue To A Girl - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

You’re richer than wealth...
beauty than diamonds...
but with hollow heart..
melted like an ice-cream
I saw a girl is in dilemma..
to get the real meaning of humanization...
good and bad..
pretty and ugly..
hate and love..
a dilemma
Take me away...far..
Far away..
to the place....
I would craze
for taste
The vastness of horizon...
will penetrate the ozone of...
eternity...
the eternal life
beyond lives
The world we lived in
is the scenes of movies
Fantasies do exist
in a dreams
of bliss
The mind is the key to a vast horizon
You have perfectly stormed the poetic avalanches
I'm coming through...
the train of prosperity and goodness
Your sacred heart
will be hunted by many enthusiasts....


Comments about An Epilogue To A Girl by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • (1/18/2009 8:48:00 PM)


    ...............wow........................ (Report) Reply

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  • (8/19/2008 11:44:00 AM)


    so many things i felt while reading this...
    not goodness nor bad...but a wealth of power...that the girl must hold...

    when you read others do you interpret it based on your own experiences?

    i feel like the girl is me as i am the girl..
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  • (5/10/2008 2:55:00 PM)


    Made me sigh at the end, thinking of goodness. Wonderful poem, Sulaiman

    X's and O's
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  • (5/9/2008 9:16:00 PM)


    This one really impressed me Sulaimon.
    You wrote with a skill that said you had done this before.
    There were no stumbles along the way. This was very
    hard to do, and i recognize it as such. A wonderful
    job on a difficult task.

    GW62
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  • (5/6/2008 5:25:00 PM)


    Sulaiman,
    I did enjoy this one -

    The vastness of horizon...
    will penetrate the ozone of...
    eternity...

    was some nice imagery.
    Good job!
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  • (4/27/2008 11:30:00 PM)


    quite good, I very much enjoyed that one (my favorite of yours i guess) (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2008 6:17:00 PM)


    An amazily written love poem. Beutiful in many ways. (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (4/4/2008 1:53:00 AM)


    THIS IS A JOY TO READ! THANKS FOR SHARING! (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2008 1:21:00 AM)


    This is beautifu........... Well done! (Report) Reply

  • (4/1/2008 7:24:00 PM)


    Your poem is awash with metaphor and originality. I think you are contrasting the 'world lived in movies' with the vast horizon of universality. Your subject with the 'hollow heart' is perhaps capable of redemption 'your sacred heart' - or so it seems to me. You have a great feel for language Salaiman and a passionate, fertile poetic mind. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 27, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 27, 2008


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