After a poem is over,
We’ll remember what it contains.
After a song is over,
The memory of the tune remains.
After a love is over,
Comes the breaking of the chains.
After a dream is over,
Then cruel reality entertains.
After a pain is over,
A quiet, peaceful moment reigns.
After a life is over,
We go where the Lord ordains.
This is by far one of the most touching poems I've ever read...I am saving this one. It's comforting and calming and ever so truthful............marci. :)
A cleverly crafted work here Ernestine, with a good rhyming structure. Andrew x
After reading this, I feel a little bit more en-lightened, awesome, enjoyable read, the ends pulls it together, excellent Thankyou Ernestine Love duncan X
This is a well structured piece with a timeless theme and easy pace. It reads like the lyrics of a song. Perhaps a hymn. Lovely poem. Allie xxxxxxxxxx
Sweet, sobering, and elouent, indeed....A cornucopia of emotions, all depicted with fact, and refine expression... FjR
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully crafted, your words are thoughtful, intelligent and insightful. Love the way this flows. Warmest wishes, Justine.