hazem al jaber

After Your Leaving...

the sky without stars...
and the moon so dark...
the day without lights...
the summer so cold...
the body without heart....
and the blood static....

flowers changed as a rocks..
and spring to an autumn..
and a happiness to a sadness...
and a peace to afraidness...

after your leaving, , my beloved..
i can`t find a meaning to my life..
all my days became lost..
a future became past..
and the past only hurts and pains...
pains are from you...
and a wound to my heart...
so please, take carefull about heart loved you...
didn`t wish any thing from his god, ...
only a life or a death near you...

are you going to be near to me...? ? ?

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 21, 2006
Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 7, 2010

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Comments about After Your Leaving... by hazem al jaber

  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (5/28/2009 12:21:00 AM)

    lovely piece, Hazem...a paining heart sad, always turns eloquent...i especially liked your over weighing expression- 'a future became past'...thanks...10

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  • Sandy Jensen (2/13/2007 11:22:00 PM)

    what a lovely poem...i can relate very much...my body was numb for many months after i seperated from my ex partner...my body was wracked with grief...i lay curled up like a little big baby and wept night after night...it was the most horrific pain...but i have survived...and i am getting stronger...admitedly im still a little numb...still early days....

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  • Nouri Black (2/5/2007 1:23:00 AM)

    ooooooooooo i love it so much...and u know i really enjoy it so much

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  • Felicia Fortine (12/10/2006 11:17:00 AM)

    I think this is a very good poem i enjoy reading your poetry your very talented i hope you have a great week
    *Felicia*

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  • Suzan Gumush (11/27/2006 2:47:00 AM)

    Pain brings strength you never knew that existed within you. Good but sad verse. Love and best wishes suzan

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  • Jolanta Gradowicz (5/6/2006 7:04:00 AM)

    I could feel the real pain - this poem is very vivid.

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  • Nasra Al AdawiNasra Al Adawi (3/25/2006 7:31:00 AM)

    take carefull about heart loved you...

    I think you should put as
    take carefull about a heart loved you...
    Good poem though and loved the voice of pain for loosing their beloved

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  • Kayla Garcia (3/22/2006 6:39:00 PM)

    i really like this poem
    it's really beautiful.
    ^_^

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