Afterlife Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Afterlife

Rating: 4.8


Flickering lights
sleepless nights
thoughts of another life
come into your mind

Strange noises
strange voices
is that them...
The afterlife

Saturday, April 28, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: voices
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 16 August 2012

superb

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Sunny Chopra 15 June 2012

Hi Dave - A write that gets you to ponder. I like the intrigue aspect. Cheers! !

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C S 17 May 2012

I wrote a poem on the same topic, ended up like an essay, you are very good with words, saying so much with so few

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Vincent Kuo 10 May 2012

Sounds like insomnia?

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Heather Wilson 30 April 2012

The yet unknown, it could well be, great thought in that poem.

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DJ Barclay 12 March 2019

I love your poem. It was actually the first poem i chose for my school project.

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Rajnish Manga 12 January 2017

Lovely poem that gives us a hint of what we think of our afterlife. Thanks, Alan Walker. You have a wonderful style of saying things.

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Heather Wilkins 06 September 2013

the unknown who is to say. keeps one thinking

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Ameya Deshpande 11 November 2012

in few words it says a lot, I find it funny & interesting, nice!

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 29 October 2012

Thanks for reading my poem... Short and sweet, this poem conveys a thought that men tend to forget. Awesome! :)

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