The sense of loss
can't be explained.
It's as though half
of you says 'let's do
it', the other half says,
'you know you cant'.
This is such a scary ordeal to go through. I have never had a stroke but I did have bells palsy. I know it was temporary but side of face was paralyzed. It was very hard to smile. Very well written.
You paint a very realistic picture here of the aftermath of a stroke....My Aunt suffered one and she was exactly as you describe it...
Explained it perfectly. My dad has been, three years, paralyzed on one side. I see the desire to do in his eyes.
caged within a boned frame, I WILL you better An active mind Must always remain. Kind thoughts..... Tina
short and not so sweet! i think i detect one small sort of flip-flop, to try quoting your bio section about spelling mistakes. the way you feel after the stroke (if it really is you in the poem) is like my marriage feels sometimes. i may say to my wife, while we are in bed, let's do it, and she says you know you can't. : ( bri thanks for sharing. i hope you are still alive to read this or i will have wasted the last four minutes (or more) of my life!
My brother had a stroke and they told him he would never drive again. He was driving in a couple of months once home from the hospital. If this is from personal experience, I hope you've had the same success that he has. He has a slight limp. He says he has slight speech impairment, but I don't hear it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem is very well penned and so beautiful. Great choice of words and a very unique writing style.