Aftermath Of A Stroke Poem by jerry hughes

Aftermath Of A Stroke

Rating: 5.0


The sense of loss
can't be explained.
It's as though half
of you says 'let's do
it', the other half says,
'you know you cant'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 08 June 2010

This poem is very well penned and so beautiful. Great choice of words and a very unique writing style.

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Stacey Watts 07 November 2009

This is such a scary ordeal to go through. I have never had a stroke but I did have bells palsy. I know it was temporary but side of face was paralyzed. It was very hard to smile. Very well written.

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Sandra Martyres 20 October 2009

You paint a very realistic picture here of the aftermath of a stroke....My Aunt suffered one and she was exactly as you describe it...

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Callie Carroll 24 August 2009

Explained it perfectly. My dad has been, three years, paralyzed on one side. I see the desire to do in his eyes.

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Tina Mathurin 03 June 2009

caged within a boned frame, I WILL you better An active mind Must always remain. Kind thoughts..... Tina

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Bri Edwards 18 November 2014

short and not so sweet! i think i detect one small sort of flip-flop, to try quoting your bio section about spelling mistakes. the way you feel after the stroke (if it really is you in the poem) is like my marriage feels sometimes. i may say to my wife, while we are in bed, let's do it, and she says you know you can't. : ( bri thanks for sharing. i hope you are still alive to read this or i will have wasted the last four minutes (or more) of my life!

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Sue Ann Simar 23 July 2013

My brother had a stroke and they told him he would never drive again. He was driving in a couple of months once home from the hospital. If this is from personal experience, I hope you've had the same success that he has. He has a slight limp. He says he has slight speech impairment, but I don't hear it.

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Indira Babbellapati 06 July 2012

so much in so few words!

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Indira Babbellapati 06 July 2012

so much in so few words!

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William F Dougherty 24 April 2012

Honor to those who fight the good fight.

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