age questions...
the validity of both journey,
and sacrifice...
but the shadow i've cast
wouldnt even fill a thimble!
my ego rears up in outrage,
swearing at least the thimble
would bear my name....
while my soul walks off laughing in disgust,
at the absurdity of identity!
while my soul walks off laughing in disgust, at the absurdity of identity! Actually it is quite encouraging, but even in heaven it is said that we will be identified, so are you very sure that the souls would laugh in disgust? I enjoyed reading this cute poem.
Thought provoking...makes you think about alot of things, nice write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent imagery. From one ego to another love the soul walking off in disgust. 10 for originality (although not sure the vote button is actually working)