Ain'T Love Great When He Has Bad Dreams? (Humor) Poem by elysabeth faslund

Ain'T Love Great When He Has Bad Dreams? (Humor)

Rating: 5.0


I burned your toothbrush
Yesterday.
Slept by myself
Last night.
Slept like an angel.
Slept like a queen.

And, damned delighted
You had bad dreams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marci Made 23 June 2007

Goodness gracious elysabeth, were you the one that helped out a few years back? ? ? Sleeping alone can be grand, most of the time..... This is right on target, all things considered...You were less violent than I...I threw the Gucci loafers, six pairs in the sound at Todd's Point was right down the street from house on Shore Rd....heehee......marci.xo

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Gregory Collins 26 June 2007

every read j tarin towers, u might like, , , thanks gregory

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Ouch! Ouch! This is one to treasure! Tee hee... and then.. tee hee.... :) t x

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Alison Cassidy 29 June 2007

Not a word wasted in this pithy little number with a bright poetic soul. love it. Allie xxxx

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Melvina Germain 01 July 2007

This sounds like one of times we can say, ah ha 'What goes round comes round'. Excellent poem Elysabeth.--Melvina--

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Ben Gieske 05 December 2007

'I burned your toothbrush' - nice introduction. LIke all the ts and ds.

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 30 August 2007

LoL...very funny Elysabeth! Sounds like one of those times when it is nice to sleep alone...((Smile)) Short, simple and funny....how could a reader go wrong? ! Keep sharing....... =Shelley=

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Twilight Whispers 30 July 2007

Absolutely amazing, short and powerful - brilliant writing. You captured your feelings in so little words and yet we can understand fully what you mean - you have wonderful talent. Best wishes, Rebecca x

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fanniesson - 07 July 2007

It caught me really nice ending to the poem hard to believe I didn’t see it coming enjoyed

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Walt Martin 02 July 2007

... and so said the rose to the unappreciative harvester... the flower nourished in grand fashion, as the blood dropp falls from the thorn.... Rich and Tasty! ! !

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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