O' tricky children of the sphere
Mass of gasses and vapour dittoing to flare
Trickling through my nostrils to swear
That my life ever is you compounded air
O' smart invisible blare
Invisible, yet sun, moon, all twinkling to glare
Elated my eyes to swear
That my life ever is you compounded air
O' invisible solitaire
Of zephyr and thunder a melody you bear
Merry my ears swear
That my life ever is you compounded air
O' invisible painter
Of azure and 'bow an aesthetic you bear
Blown my mind enthralled to swear
That my life ever is you compounded air
Visible, audible, sensible for us everywhere
Of yourself are you aware
That scary too, now a smoky, toxic ware
remarkable flow of words, feelings and images! I loved it,10+++ and thanks for words about my poem, i really appreciate it! regards
they way you stairize the human race in its race...beautiful fresh approach and a clarion call great poetry cheers
A very beautiful concept Indira! 'I breathe in and I breathe out and they call life; I am certain one day it stops? Thank you so much for your prompt comment on my scribbling.
O' smart invisible blare Invisible, yet sun, moon, all twinkling to glare Elated my eyes to swear That my life ever is you compounded air - - A fascinating piece work! My pleasure reading it time and again! Stay always happy and blessed dear madam!
I felt revisiting this poem because I love reading it again and again. I quote: “O' smart invisible blare/Invisible, yet sun, moon, all twinkling to glare/Elated my eyes to swear/That my life ever is you compounded air”. You must have put your heart and soul in penning this elegant piece of poetry! Pray God bless you always dear madam…….10
An extraordinary poem. Without air we can't survive but air pollution is leading to so many disease. When will we stop polluting nature...
O' invisible painter Of azure and 'bow an aesthetic you bear Blown my mind enthralled to swear That my life ever is you compounded air....Wonderful expression! Its an adorable piece of poetry! Thanks dear madam for sharing....10
A beautiful poem on the atmosphere, Indira Ranganathan's skill of writing poems is shining throughout the poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Indira, your poems are always a joy to read..This one just floats on the air in its lightness and flow..Thanks for sharing. With best wishes, Yelena.