Alankar (Decor) -270

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The Triune(Chained Threesome Sonnet)

Chained Sonnet--a quatorzain, using any sonnet form
Each line begins with the end word of the previous line
Rhyme of selected sonnet form
Iambic pentameter
Pivot of selected sonnet

Threesome Sonnet
A threesome sonnet is a quatorzain made up of
a cinquain, a quatrain, a tercet and a couplet
Three different things described in three stanzas of five, four, three lines respectively to end in a couplet giving
an unique conclusion connecting the three different things
Written in iambic pentameter
Rhyme scheme: for the couplet alone--aa

The Triune(Chained Threesome Sonnet)

He who creates everything-the Causer
Causer of all creations-the Father
The Father of matter and forms and lives
Lives by the divine artisan constant
Constant, Brahma our Lord of creations

Creations can not be just idle there
There needs to be their labour and outputs
Outputs whole be protected by our Lord
Our Lord Vishnu is He who protects all

All is well yet all is with a timeout
Out arises Lord Shiva and destroys
Destroyed but all are remade by Brahma

Brahma-Vishnu-Shiva the lords triune
Triune lords--the One God as three in tune

Note: Threesome sonnet is a new form invented by me. It is a form
of a quatorzain or sonnet. Amid so many combinations
of stanza pattern like 3 quatrains and a couplet or an octave and a sestet
and so on already written by various poets, this sonnet with a
cinquain, quatrain, tercet and a couplet struck my mind one day and I wrote one.
I have given the name 'Threesome' because of the three different things described
in the first three stanzas.
I have also two more sonnets invented by me
called Reverse Threesome sonnet and 15x14 sonnet. I have chosen the
Threesome sonnet as a choice selection to write the Chained Sonnet
and so I think this chained sonnet can be called Chained Threesome Sonnet


A wonderful poetic form brilliantly crafted.

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Varsha M 01 August 2021

Congratulations ma'am. Your creativity is awesome. Indeed this is the true alankar. Well woven poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2021

5 Stars full on Top for this scintillating own invented Sonnet Chained Threesome Sonnet)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2021

This is the second time I read your own invented Sonnet: Chained Threesome Sonnet. Perfectly explained and wonderfully presenting the Sonnet I mentioned. True fascinating read, dear Madam!

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M Asim Nehal 01 August 2021

Full Stars.....

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M Asim Nehal 01 August 2021

One cannot ask for more on this. All three forms nicely explained followed by wonderful poem.

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