Alive Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Alive

Rating: 4.7


I'm suffused with the soft, sunny serenity
of spring
Feeling in my blood the fluorescent freshness
of flowers
I'm at peace with the world
I'm at peace with myself

Looking up, I see the birds in a flight
of rapture
Their wings are spread out to embrace
the world
And I see the soft, blue sky smiling down
on all the mortals alike

It feels good to be alive

Thursday, February 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,joy,peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry Middleton 04 February 2016

That is a wonderful feeling. I envy you.

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Nosheen Irfan 05 February 2016

Unfortunately every feeling is passing. But must be relished while it lasts.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 November 2022

I totally agree with Dillip Bravo and kudos

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2022

It's a magnificent poem. Full marks

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Jane Campion 07 July 2019

Nature sends us messages of peace.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2018

This is a gorgeous poem on spring and beauty having stunning expression and nice diction. The serenity of spring brings peace to the mind. The blue sky smiles and gives hope to be alive. Nicely executed and shared.10

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Valsa George 10 February 2016

A lovely image of peaceful serenity and delectable beauty........! Greatly enjoyed!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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