All As One Poem by Elena Sandu

All As One

Rating: 4.6


We Humans, in our roots are taking pride
And tell how own country is best at this or that
Or how my family was great
For whole neighborhood, village, or city.
At school, we are taught how other people
wanted our land
and how our ancestors, to keep it
with heroism fought back.
Are taught the colors of our flag
And own national anthem have to sing
Or listen from time to time.
And so, most humans, in family, land,
And country are taking pride.

I don't say it's not right,
But sigh, we truly are
So much, much more
If only we'd be taught
From early time
How from our head to the toes,
Entire body works
And how our feet connect to land
And how the air connects with our lungs
and water in the body with the clouds
Will find then, learn, how precious is each life
We'll learn to love and take great pride
In the roots of oneblade of grass
That everywhere will grow the same
Not caring of a land's name, or an anthem
All blades of grasses are babies
of our Earth, the Sun, and Clouds.
And just the same, we, humans, are.

All As One
Saturday, June 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: connection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 15 June 2019

I agree. We are taught most things that are not important to be a human. A great poem dear. Thank you so much.

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Elena Sandu 15 June 2019

Thank you so much dear Jane, yes, very true; who could know, I wonder if maybe we are meant to find our human path through sufferings? Love and smiles

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Sandra Feldman 15 June 2019

Absolutely fabulous poem! The true picture of what it is to be human and, let me quote you, " How precious life is" . A poem all should read and feel to know what being human really is. With respect for every being and every blade of grass. We are all one, poets don't need guns. And here dear Elena, you have created a masterpiece of Nature's beauty and human brotherhood all in one and as one World.Even if it never happens, your poem has made us visualize and feel the truth.

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Elena Sandu 15 June 2019

Thank you so much dear Sandra! Indeed the poets need no guns nor flags, as they may hold inside their hearts this magic infinite land cultivated with love, a world free to be shared with every soul in need. Big love

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Aufie Zophy 23 March 2021

It would be so nice if we all teach our children that not the warriors are the heroes, but the ones who truly cared, the wise ones, the poets : ) ...

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Aufie Zophy 23 March 2021

Wonderful poem, Elena, Let us make an anthem for the earth.

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Khairul Ahsan 06 May 2020

The title is apt. This poem is, as poet C Faustino has said, 'a cry for oneness! 'Will find then, learn, how precious is each life We'll learn to love and take great pride In the roots of oneblade of grass That everywhere will grow the same Not caring of a land's name, or an anthem' - thanks for these wonderful thoughts on universal fraternity.

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C F 16 June 2019

A cry for oneness, a world without borders, each life as precious as one blade of grass. Great write.10+

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 June 2019

such a nice write, Elena. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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