All I Can Be....Is Me! Poem by Kuji soliman

All I Can Be....Is Me!

Rating: 4.8


Who am i?
a violinist?
a poet?
a painter?
a singer?
Won't somebody please tell me?
open my eyes, let me see!
Am i a loser?
winner?
am i summer?
am i winter?
what am I to you?
Nothing?
something?
Anything?
What should i be?
An ordinairy person?
or this artist with no future?
I guess all i can be,
is Sophia, boring old me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Natalya Mitchell 14 October 2009

your not boring your a friens a son and a great person who inspires people. your wrote a great poem... thanks!

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 15 October 2009

This is a very nice poem! Deep for your age!

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Surya . 15 October 2009

you have set the process of thinking rolling.very nice. voted10 surya

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Omar Ibrahim 16 October 2009

all what i know is that you're genius! ! ! i'm not kidding and i don't know how to kid....i'm sure that you are very talented......you can be a violinist....but you have to work harder....i know you are trying but you have to practice more..i mean if there is a day you are not busy...you can hold your violin and don't leave it only after six hours at least.....! ! yes...or if you feel that you are tired...i'm sure you will be the best...........and you also can be a famous and great poet if you also worked hard on it...and so on......you are special....you can even ask dr.osman.....haha...

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Anne Unknown 16 October 2009

Nicely written. Just be you by the way. Keep it up

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Uthman Ahmad 15 February 2019

Love that. Being who you are

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Meggie Gultiano 06 December 2009

you don't have to be negative..keep pushing, and move..this is an interesting piece. Well done, my dear

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Catrina Heart 22 October 2009

A human with much talent like you do is a gifted one my friend......and all you can be is being you! ! ! Great poem............

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John Knight 20 October 2009

Hi Kuji - In todays world a smart girl like you can be anything you want to be! A Musician - A Writer - A Scientist - A Doctor - A Dancer - An Astronaut. You are everything to all the PH Family because you are so so smart and so so Young! You are not ordinary or boring Kuji - you are wonderful and we all love you and your poetry - thsi is why we all score you a BIG TEN! Love in poetry - JOHN.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 20 October 2009

All you can be is 'you' who just happen to be an excellent poet-keep writing...and feel bettter. I send you healing love and a 10 for this lovely written poem

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