Alone To Die Poem by Neil Crosby

Alone To Die

Rating: 5.0


Alone to die
No one to cry
I'll end my life
By hang or by knife
Just to end this pain
My tortured strain
Cut my heart out
No one to stop this
No one to scream or shout
This is my heartbreak as it is
Alone to die
Sad goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 02 October 2008

deep and painful.....i have written on similar lines iam so alone

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Victoria Gunn 03 October 2008

Real agony in your words n a lot of pain. It's beautiful.

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 01 March 2009

hey friend: owner this poem must be a afraid litle girl who was raped.i dont like.yes world belongs to bads and if so you must be worse and more stronger

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Demon lover 26 December 2008

Very Beautiful and sad

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Aijaz Asif 16 November 2008

beautiful very beautiful write sir, as dark poems are one of my favs. i loved thais one but im not succidal but i do kill myself evry minute with the weapon of a pen and write a poem with the blood of sorrows on the dark book of thoughts, and dying every minute has its own pleasure but you are still young and alot of happy moments are waiting for you so keep smiling man.....thanks 10++++++

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Tyease Collins 12 October 2008

Such agony that it's beautiful. Your words are so strong and so truthful..... you are an extremely good poet -Tyease

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 October 2008

No.......I'll stop you if I have too! The desicion to die is by God......not by us! Don't opt for a short cut.Take a longer one, cuz you'd find many roads that's worth driving! ! !

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Neil Crosby

Neil Crosby

Fort Knox, Kentucky
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