Along A Running Train Comments

A SHORT, SWEET AND A THOUGHT PROVOKING POEM! 10! -Raj

Excellent juxtaposition of outer turmoil with the inner silence.

its very very nice...the stark contrast of a freight traina nd the utter inner silence....reflective and well penned lines cheers

Enjoyable write, and there is something about trains that seem to tranquilize all of us.... Very nicely penned....

As a student, I hv done long train journeys, ur imagination has put life into all those, which otherwise were vegetate. There is a magnetism in ur poems....

Indira, you have managed to capture that moment of solitude despite the surrounding chaos and confusion...Terrific write 10

a beautiful poem 10+++

its possible to be engulfed by silence in the midst of utter chaos. very imaginative metaphor for life and incessant clutter in the mind.10

this poem is as though divine realization dawns upon the soul to get out of the rut and the same old foul (of din and clutter)

Indira, enjoyed this little piece of magic.10/10 Ian