Am Just A Dust Poem by Rini Shibu

Am Just A Dust

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My vision is getting blurred
I cant see myself
Only you are in my sight
so radiant and bright
The songs I write for you
from the depth of my heart
Are neither read by you
Nor it reaches your heart
Because am just a dust
under your feet
And the foot you set
on me is all enough
to make me feel blessed

Monday, September 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: perception,reality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 25 September 2017

Marvelous writing Rini Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thanks Mario, I am delighted you liked it

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 September 2017

Wonderful poem Rini, sure to touch ones heart. Loved it.

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Rob Lamberton 26 March 2023

Much grows from the dust even love I believe.

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Robert Murray Smith 06 May 2018

A poem that shows feelings no matter how ine is treated. I wouldn't put 'a' before dust.+++10 Robert

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2017

What a wonderful poem You have splendidly portrayed the down to the earth attitude in you

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 October 2017

Under your feet! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 07 October 2017

Thanks Edward for your comments Rini

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Dev Anand 07 October 2017

And the foot you set on me is all enough to make me feel blessed. this is fine.... after reading i thought God was walking to you and u felt blessed.... dev

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Rini Shibu 07 October 2017

Thanks Dev.. We all are just dust

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