## Am Stuck [senryu] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

## Am Stuck [senryu]

Rating: 4.1


if you miss me dear
look into the moon for me
have stuck myself there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 10 June 2009

butiful composition of love in a senryu.. lovely 2 read.

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this is good. nice imagination

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 June 2009

i could not understand properly.can you explain so that i canenjoy its maeaning?

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Catrina Heart 05 June 2009

fine craft to read..........thanks!

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Seema Chowdhury 05 June 2009

another one...... good work.

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Smiley Hooker 17 June 2009

You're very funny, Sam! Don't you know I'm a friend to the Moon? Say 'hi' for me, okay? very nice! : -)

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Chitra - 15 June 2009

an indelible mark of love on the silver orb

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A senryu with humor! Who is going to unstick you? Maybe the sun will will have to come closer to melt the glue. 10 Karin Anderson

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C. P. Sharma 10 June 2009

Beautifully stuck. CP

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C. P. Sharma 10 June 2009

Beautifully stuck. CP

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