DEALS, DEALS, DEALS.
Small room, with twelve bathrooms.
Envelopes fill the baskets.
Mirrors with lipstick kisses.
In the small room - elbows bump.
In the office.
OCCUPIED - next bathroom.
Outside neighbors look.
Cesspool trucks arrive.
Dirt cover-up off lid.
Man preys lid open.
Next years news escapes.
CESSPOOL CLEAN and POLITICS AGAIN.
Oh, wonderful imagination, you are able to put common into a good picture. Usually, the more common things are not easy to be fixed into a poem. You've successed.+10.
Mirrors with lipstick kisses. In the small room - elbows bump. interesting lines. you are a very interesting poet. I like this. good job. *Purkey Girl*
It is an original way to poetry... Live and familiar drawing. 10// Tsira
Very good poem - simplified poetry, well written and intellignet. Ibrar
Outside neighbors look. Cesspool trucks arrive. Dirt cover-up off lid. Man preys lid open. Next years news escapes. CESSPOOL CLEAN and POLITICS AGAIN..yes it is everywhere adn it happens with arrival of politicians... but city gets clean face...so nice....10 read mine pora pora pora
its definitely a scratch that shall make lot of noise...........pls read my poem called ITS AMERICA YOU FOOL, its a satire with a viewpoint of an outsider
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow that makes you think its a very interesting poem i hope one day i will be able to write poems like this one that put pictures in your head