An Angel In The Night Poem by Amitava Sur

An Angel In The Night

Rating: 4.9


In the misty moon -lit night an angel did alight
Peeped me through the window-
With my beloved holding tight.
She was smiling at me with a gleam in her face
Having a glowing ring all around her head.

I jumped up with a maddening joy -
And told her to come near me.
But with a majestic smile in her face
She was nodding her head, didn't move.
I asked her - 'then why my dear? Again to make me cry '!

She told me 'Oh' dear I also do cry and ought to be with thine
But the body what I left, can never get back again.
The angel brought me tonight to see you and say hello-
I was always yours and still I am thine'.

With a pool of tears in my eyes I waved my hands out,
The angel with a lovely smile started to fly -
Clasping you under her wings, saying good bye.

I sprang up in my bed, rubbing my tearing eyes
Still in a hallucination thinking where was I?
In the morning's soothing light - I looked up in the sky
I shouted with a cry
'Oh' dear -I will come very soon -you just wait for mine'

Looking blankly through the window panes
Found a white cloud was leisurely passing by -
Slowly away from my sight………
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Amitava (20.01.2014) on my birth day today.



©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY AMITAVA SUR

Monday, January 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On my birth day today, I'm missing my loved too much and this poem is dedicated on her memory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 04 April 2014

Thank you respected poets for liking the poem

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Roseann Shawiak 28 March 2014

Amitava, beautiful, sad, some joy, all in one poem. Got a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. Wanted you to be able to hold on to her, but the angel took her away from you again in your poem. Totally loved it, Amitava, it's a perfect 10. RoseAnn

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Valerie Dohren 21 January 2014

Oh, meant to say hope you had a great birthday, and many happy returns.

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Valerie Dohren 21 January 2014

Very beautiful and poignant Amitava. Those of us who have lost loved ones can relate to this, yearning to see them again.

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Kanav Justa 21 January 2014

this a beautiful poem, , , laden with emotions and your love for her even when she is not here with you, , , , great write

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Stephen Katona 20 March 2015

I would love to read 'An Angel in the Night II by Amitava Sur' in which Amitava talks and laughs with his beloved angel and sees no distance between them anymore. Perhaps you might feel able to write such a continuation after reading 'Death is Nothing at All' by Henry Scott Holland. I hope reading it brings you comfort and joy.

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Ken E Hall 29 July 2014

Births anniversary brought you an angel so sad when one loses someone close...your saving star will join you together one day thats what I feel in this lovely poem...regards

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Akhtar Jawad 10 July 2014

I have read many poems on a birthday but this one is different in style. Although too late but I wish many more to lovely Amitava. I expect next time I shall read another beautiful poem from Amitava.

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Kirti Sharma 28 June 2014

belated Happy Birthday sir... your work is really brautiful... each line makes the reader feel how much you are missin your loved one..

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Yash Shinde 06 April 2014

.this work reaches heart.and comes straight from your heart...........lovely descriptive write....... You may like- - Rosy lay

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