An Aussie Summer Poem by jerry hughes

An Aussie Summer



The sun rises early.
'Bloody daylight saving.'
Birds fly. Grasses grow.
The Victa's primed and
splutters to life.

Johnny's off to play cricket.
Sarah's off to the beach.
Mum's making dinner.
Dad's mowing the lawn
and shooing off bees.

Next door awakes after
an all night party.
'Jesus, I'm still pissed'
His lament interrupted by
the flushing of the dunny.

A dog barks. A blue-tongue
uncomfortable with strangers
waddles into the hydrangers.

Midday. The sun's ablaze.
Mr Whippy's van circles.
Children run to it with
shiny coins and eyes.
The sounds of summer
punctuated by flies.

Early evening.
The kids return.
Johnny scored eighty
and took two wickets.
Sarah's red and glowing,
not only from the sun.

Mum's set the table
and prepared the tea.
Dad the silly bugger
was stung by a bee.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This is excellent Jerry. I love it. It sounds like a script written for Paul hogan. It is all so real about suburban Australia. 'The sounds of Summer punctuated by flies' such clever writing..... Karin Anderson

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 May 2009

Wonderful composition. Very interesting. Love it.

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Wojja Fink 20 April 2009

like listening to grandad tell tales in graphic meandering vividness...............John

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Well how I can relate to this fun yet true poem. I lived in hot, horrible Blacktown in Sydney as a teenager and you are spot on. Loved it! Karin Anderson

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Well how I can relate to this fun yet true poem. I lived in hot, horrible Blacktown in Sydney as a teenager and you are spot on. Loved it! Karin Anderson

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 July 2015

Being a pommie I'm glad to read of Australian life... in someways much like ours. Good piece.

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Lyn Paul 17 October 2014

Hello Jerry, you have taken me right back. It was the Mr whippee van and the bumble bee that really made me laugh. I hear Mr whipppee every Sunday. Cheers

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Mandi June 05 July 2012

What a colorful and smile-provoking poem!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 July 2010

A wonderful picture. Thanks!

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Vandavasu Vittal 02 October 2009

You are a poetical genius sir! A write as charming as the evening you describe.

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