An Empty Frame Poem by kite remedy

An Empty Frame

Rating: 3.3


I sit before a frame
It's empty and it's not the same
Picture there is none
Better if there's one
Of memory I just have
past we all have left

I sit before a nightstand
With this lonely thing in my hand
I hope that you all can see
or are you the same as me?
Likewise this empty frame so empty
that best resembles you,
and me..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 12 December 2008

A hollow frame An empty name in this usless game are we the same? Too melanocholic poem............................

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 December 2008

Nice poetic eloquence! neat and clean.............10++++

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Min Sia 12 December 2008

An empty heart..Your words flowing through.. Bringing such deep emotion of sadness... It's beautiful..fine imagery... Great poem...

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Reshma Ramesh 12 December 2008

hmmmm....empty heart with an empty frame........well penned

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Subbaraman N V 12 December 2008

Yes; I am the same as you!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 December 2008

We are the empty frame.....10/10.

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Joseph Poewhit 19 December 2008

Poem has a lot to say about art

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Awesome poem.. The title fits it well too.. Great write ~Krista~

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<font color =fusha>Amy 12 December 2008

fantastic poem. Nice write and a very emotion and heartfelt notion

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Sid John Gardner. 12 December 2008

I sat before that empty frame too.Once I spent a whole night looking at her picture.When that picture was removed it took away my heart as well. Good intelligent writing. Appreciated. Sid

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