kite remedy

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! ! ! The Love Today! ! ! - Poem by kite remedy

The love today,
is it what we try to find?
Does the world force us to fight?
Does it feel right
to make others cry?

The love today,
is it what we whisper in our prayer?
When we're so tired and in a heavy rain,
having injured and in a great pain,
is it where we try to run away?

The love today,
is it the meaning our lips want to scream?
is it the meaning our hearts want to keep from grief?
When others plead for others' mercy,
can we just stay still and let them be?

The love today,
swaying slowly by a breezing wind,
displayed sadly on a TV screen,
the puddle by a cracked street,
is reflecting the love held by a sleeping kid.

The love today,
have taught me a simple meaning,
when in our heart, sorrow is clinging,
when we're exhausted, we may just sing,
'there's no more love than what we believe in...'


P.S.: Dedicated to EVERYONE who is involved or cares about Middle East Tragedy.


Comments about ! ! ! The Love Today! ! ! by kite remedy

  • (9/21/2009 4:44:00 PM)

    'there's no more love than what we believe in...'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (1/15/2009 10:57:00 AM)

    kite it was wonderful, i loved it so much.
    i love your feelings.
    it was beautiful. well done
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  • (1/14/2009 7:34:00 AM)

    This is a wonderfull poem, well writen and heart felt
    David
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  • (1/14/2009 4:37:00 AM)

    Excellent strong write...Fi (Report)Reply

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  • (1/13/2009 3:54:00 AM)

    that was so much of honesty... and hoping and praying the world can be a better place to live in...! ! !

    : D
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  • (1/9/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    This is a great poem written very well with honestly great piece

    Krista
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  • (1/9/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    I really like this poem... I think that we all want to be loved in a certain way and as much as one may hate to admit it, it is the truth. Often times we are left with wondering wether or not someone will love us for who we really are. Remember that 'forever' is nothing more than just a word. I also think that to love is to live, and to live is to love. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/9/2009 6:23:00 AM)

    nicely penned--anjali (Report)Reply

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  • (1/7/2009 2:29:00 AM)

    amusing... yes, where's the love now in this kaleidoscopic world of ours... like it thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • (1/7/2009)

    very thoughtful and touching.......
    loved it.
    10
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  • (1/3/2009 1:22:00 AM)

    Yes, the world needs it very badly today! A nice write! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/2/2009 4:16:00 PM)

    i liked it

    especially the repetetiveness of the first line


    nice write
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  • (1/2/2009 7:34:00 AM)

    Very much in the Bible whats happening (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 2, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, January 2, 2009


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