kite remedy

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An Evening Walk - Poem by kite remedy

An evening walk,
just after both of us talked.
I walked her home afterward,
through a breezy boulevard.
I saw her cold and I was alerted,
from my shoulders to hers, I nudged my jacket.
At her boarding house I left her be,
and I tiptoed across the street.
I turned my back to catch her greeting
she sent me in her hand waving.
I passed a building and so a field,
a content feeling suddenly built.
I tripped along the way alone,
it had been half a distance home.
I rose my head to look at the cloud,
at the beautiful canvas I wanted to applaud
and an evening walk I took in delight,
whilst the day rested in twilight..


Comments about An Evening Walk by kite remedy

  • (1/14/2009 7:30:00 AM)

    An evening walk can cover many aspects of life, you have mentioned yours and I
    have mentioned mine!
    Do read my poem 'AN EVENING WALK'!
    -Raj Nandy
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  • Aiswarya. T.anish (12/14/2008 7:05:00 AM)

    Really Nice poem..I liked it a lot (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (12/12/2008 3:09:00 AM)

    Compact composition.........beautiful words chosen.......great! ......10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • (12/10/2008 3:23:00 AM)

    A poem that offers much (Report)Reply

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  • (12/9/2008 6:30:00 AM)

    Lovely..very passionate..the feeling of contentment..of the blooming love..

    Expressive words..Great write!
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  • (12/7/2008 3:14:00 AM)

    Very good poem indeed (Report)Reply

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  • (12/6/2008 12:46:00 PM)

    Like following a story...it has such a calm, settled feel, very thoughtful. Good work!
    Caroline
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  • (12/6/2008 1:55:00 AM)

    yes............a walk with your girl friend takes u on top of the world............nice love poem... (Report)Reply

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  • (12/4/2008 10:54:00 PM)

    Wowwwww, , this is very cool...
    I felt very calm when I read this one, , ,
    Slowly follow you're story in this poem, , ,
    I like it, , , (^_^) v

    Naru Kaede
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  • (12/4/2008 2:13:00 PM)

    Poem paints a nice picture (Report)Reply

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  • (12/4/2008 1:11:00 PM)

    a very beautiful write indeed, you sketch it very well and surely those momments are never forgetable....thanks for sharing 10
    rgds
    asif
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  • (12/4/2008 11:20:00 AM)

    excellent poem

    great write, you have put beautiful scenery and beautiful emotions together, nice one
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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (12/4/2008 7:21:00 AM)

    Some moments are beautiful..................to ponder. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/4/2008 1:04:00 AM)

    the gimmick of love makes this poem makes a real feel
    turned my back to catch her greeting
    she sent me in her hand waving.
    I passed a building and so a field,
    a content feeling suddenly built.
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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (12/3/2008 10:08:00 PM)

    beautiful...thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • (12/3/2008 10:05:00 PM)

    Wow i can imagen this all the way through your poem it was lovely thank you for sharing..

    Krista
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 3, 2008



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