An Evening Walk

Rating: 3.3
An evening walk,
just after both of us talked.
I walked her home afterward,
through a breezy boulevard.
I saw her cold and I was alerted,
from my shoulders to hers, I nudged my jacket.
At her boarding house I left her be,
and I tiptoed across the street.
I turned my back to catch her greeting
she sent me in her hand waving.
I passed a building and so a field,
a content feeling suddenly built.
I tripped along the way alone,
it had been half a distance home.
I rose my head to look at the cloud,
at the beautiful canvas I wanted to applaud
and an evening walk I took in delight,
whilst the day rested in twilight..
Wednesday, December 3, 2008
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COMMENTS
Raj Nandy 14 January 2009
An evening walk can cover many aspects of life, you have mentioned yours and I have mentioned mine! Do read my poem 'AN EVENING WALK'! -Raj Nandy
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Aiswarya. T.anish 14 December 2008
Really Nice poem..I liked it a lot
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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 December 2008
Compact composition.........beautiful words chosen.......great! ......10+++
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Colin Jeffery 10 December 2008
A poem that offers much
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Min Sia 09 December 2008
Lovely..very passionate..the feeling of contentment..of the blooming love.. Expressive words..Great write!
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Colin Jeffery 07 December 2008
Very good poem indeed
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Caroline Weeks 06 December 2008
Like following a story...it has such a calm, settled feel, very thoughtful. Good work! Caroline
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Reshma Ramesh 06 December 2008
yes............a walk with your girl friend takes u on top of the world............nice love poem...
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Naru Kaede 04 December 2008
Wowwwww, , this is very cool... I felt very calm when I read this one, , , Slowly follow you're story in this poem, , , I like it, , , (^_^) v Naru Kaede
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Joseph Poewhit 04 December 2008
Poem paints a nice picture
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