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An Immortal Life

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Bind yourself with honesty
Adorn your voice with truth,
Wash your hearts off brutality
And present yourself with hospitability and soothe.

No treasure is so precious as descipline,
No habbit is better than keeping oneself clean,
No mind would be sharp without good listening skill
And quiteness would make you all firm, determined and still.

You should be as ambitious as your eyes,
For they travel so long and vast
The only trick for good life is to be wise
And act with vim and zest till the last.

Besides all you should work as if,
No luck or God can help you achieve your goal,
But also, to climb any great height or cliff,
Pray to God as if nothing but His blessings can immortalise your soul.
Saturday, April 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 September 2017
No treasure is so precious as descipline, No habbit is better than keeping oneself clean, No mind would be sharp without good listening skill And quiteness would make you all firm, determined and still. your great and fine philosophy of life is clearly described here..... love this poem. thankyou dear poetess. tony
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Rahul Choudhary 25 October 2016
beautiful lines as well as writing skill and with best finish
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Naima Ansari 25 October 2016
I ThankYou ????
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Rahul Choudhary 27 October 2016
all thanks to you madam
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Akhtar Jawad 09 October 2016
A wonderful spiritual poem, nicely penned................................
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Naima Ansari 10 October 2016
Thanks a lot, Mr.Jawad??
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2015
Very nicely and aptly presented. Yes, the secrets of meaningful life are virtuous deeds and inquisitive zests. Best suggestion for the beginners. I think you are not a student but a teacher. Many thanks my dear Naima, may God bless you and your family........10
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Naima Ansari 20 April 2015
Thanks a lot, Mr.Mahakul! I am glad that you liked my poem and that you had made me proud by comparing me with a teacher. ThankYou sir for reading it.I would keep writing and I demand you to please keep voting them.
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Kelly Kurt 18 April 2015
Great poem, Naima. Thank you for sharing
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