An Inscrutable Silence Poem by Romeo Della Valle

An Inscrutable Silence

Rating: 5.0


The no message message
A space without a frame
No sound or a syllable
leaving behind a name

Inscrutable silence
Wrong number didn't dare?
Nothing in particular
Though someone had been there...

For they tried more than once,
To see if I was home,
I was of course, they knew it
By not answering the phone...

Perhaps it was destiny
I left hanging on the line,
'Why didn't you answer?
We called time after time'

'We could not reach you
So we gave up the cause,
Is misery the resting place
You go to just because...?

'No' I tried to defend
The weakness in my ego
Hesitating to answer
The calling of long ago...

'You will have to explain someday
And face yourself, 'then,
The voice added:
'You will have to face us as well'...

'I know, ' I said, 'I was
The blank space on the tape,
The one who wished to say something
No recording device could ever replay!


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber Toohey 23 September 2011

The first I've read by you, it was a good one to get my feet wet with!

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Diplove Gautam 20 September 2011

It is a very nice poem with nice starting, best content and with the deserved ending...very interesting and inspiring one.

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Vipins Puthooran 18 September 2011

How wonderfully you relate the very first line and the last two lines. So amazing poetry here... ((You will have to explain; Some day and face yourself.)) ..and it's a fact...10++++

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Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

The horrors of the telephone. You've expressed your emotions really well here, and this is quite relatable.

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Sajna Kailas 13 September 2011

you again and again rocking, my knowledge and talent is not enough to comment your poems by your great fan sajna (Y. N) JESUS LOVES YOU! ! ! ! !

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