And A Falling Star Poem by Romeo Della Valle
And A Falling Star
And a falling star
Will relieve you
From the shadowless and sorrowful
Solitude of marble....
When you will rise hopelessly from prayer
The twilight will fade
In the black of your beautiful eyes....
And there shall be
No more complaints....
And maybe again,
You shall be a happy
woman again...
I doubt it....Who knows?
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A beautiful poem with plenty of wisdom. Though written very simply, ideas are deep and moving. Nice write.
rom the shadowless and sorrowful Solitude of marble.... When you will rise hopelessly from prayer The twilight will fade In the black of your beautiful eyes...... strong conviction with strength of prayer.. nicely worded and appealing too....10
An encouraging poem, uplifts and edifies. Wonderfully done; D
Metaphor Epochal…with swing [You shall be a happy] and de-swing [I doubt it...]…these poetic Topsy Turvy bear high poetic vibes and readers imbibe more calorie…fine concept… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
how lucky the woman is, such wonderful dedication. Keep on sharing!
A dedication of wisdom indeed for the lady with the falling star to open your thoughts...very nice to read...regards
Beautiful imagery. Short, sweet, meaningful. I hope whomever it is dedicated to read and appreciated it!
When you will rise hopelessly from prayer The twilight will fade ........................................ Romeo, it's very beautifully Thanks for the comment, and for your poetry.... they are so remarkable.. Tsira,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/23/2023 7:32:24 PM # 1.0.0.1113
Wonderful poem radiating beacons of wisdom.