Compton Wright

Rookie - 87 Points (Washington DC)

An Outcast Eyes! ! ! - Poem by Compton Wright

As the anger eats through my nightmares
it builds up hatred and insanity like I need
to have in my mind as it bents and twists
I think in split into two causing me to become
a lunatic, what went wrong, how this happen
too much rumors and lies about me
that he say she said stuff but how about
he said she said that he is evil
I am starting to think that this rage
in me is fueling me to feel to become Satan's
angel from deep from my deepest darkest
boiled intensity of the gun thrills
the enjoyment of my rage starting to make
my spine shiver all over but then my heart
start to laugh in joy as they deserve every bullet
as lunchtime was about to begin my mind was
telling me to stop this madness but my feelings
was destroying my judgment on others
my heart was admitting each step, each moment
and every bullet that was shot in the air
all I heard was screams from the women
and I heard the bodies drops harder then
a plane crash hitting the twin towers
the shells played their melody of destruction
I felt so alive, so much power
in the weapon itself a.357 magnum as
the police had a jacket that made me feel
so trapped with some pills that relaxed me
but the treatment I had was worthy because
when I heard the court decision I was glad
put me in the chair where the most ruthless killers
die in greatness and notorious, looked as kings
but for others like heartless, soulless monsters
put me in a casket let me rot as the victims
did as well so I hope that the world remember
me for what I have done as you just saw my
rage becomes my weakness never I felt such happiness
my friend as I still the blood lust to kill once more so
goodbye cruel world as another killer made history
in the united killers of America...God Speed
HA! don't make me laugh

Comments about An Outcast Eyes! ! ! by Compton Wright

  • ~Just Fine~ (5/1/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    ahaha! ! !
    i love it!

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  • Tyease CollinsTyease Collins (10/12/2008 11:26:00 PM)

    Wow.....this poem was extremely're a very good poet


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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/10/2008 12:34:00 PM)

    Hi CJ, the writes was nice.its a kinda educating, but honestly its not right at all to take other's lives! ! ! its brutal, cruel and uncivilised and mostly INSANE! (Report)Reply

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  • ? ? NAME... ... PENDING? ? ? ? (10/9/2008 9:25:00 PM)

    so...deep...i like it...a lot... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 3, 2009

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