I have a dream
To collect
All the unuttered words
Pouring out from the secret chambers
Of my heart,
I would string them like a pearl necklace
Moistening them with my tears
I would décor
The million moments of my life
And offer
At His feet
He, who has filled
All my dreams.
A beautiful poem! Don't do partiality please! I have read some of your poems but I have not yet received a return comment from you...OK madam please do as you feel...
Thank you Magadha Rani for reading and appreciating my poems.Due to time constraint I spend less time on Poem Hunter.I will surely come back to read your poems..
Vharati- this gem is on my fav poem list and I love re-reading it time after time- -it is great poetry that feels as fresh and lovely the 20th time as the first time.- - - - -> All the unuttered words / Pouring out from the secret chambers/ Of my heart, , < =- - - - - Only pure poetic genius can pen these words. 10 million stars for this beauty! ! ! I would string them like a pearl necklace
Are 'His' and 'He' referring to 'God' or 'your Husband', ....OR to 'ME'? ? bri : )
........HEY! , PoemHUNTER, I'm 'hunting' for the comment I was working on when...POOF! ! ..PH (I guess) stole it. : (
I liked your lines 1-7. From line 8 onward I got a bit....OK, 'quite a bit', ......uncertain of your meaning, & failing to feel comfortable with my
Bharati, I've LOOKED but not FOUND 'decor' listed as a verb, only a noun, . So I will READ decor as 'decorate' in your poem! : )
I happy that poetess Magadha who has left this sphere has put a wonderful comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Please read the famous speech of martin Luther king I have a dream
Thank you so much Sekharan Pookkat for reading and commenting on the poem.I will surely read the speech.Will you suggest the source from which I will get to read the speech ?