Anderson Dccclix Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Anderson Dccclix

Rating: 5.0


Yr eyes remind me of the sea
Blue like the tears that rust my soul
I wanted to give them to you
But they dissolved with the ride
You said you left for nothing I did
I am not sure of that
I know I have no patience
And I can be loud when I am angry
I have no sympathy for stupidity
But you said that's untrue
What was it that caused you to pick up
And leave without a word
Just a note is all I have
Telling me something came up
And it's not my fault
You didn't say when you're coming back
So, I am sitting at the edge of the sea--the blue sea
As I contemplate jumping into it or forgetting the past
Which one would you like me to do?

Tuesday, September 20, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: bittersweet love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 24 September 2022

Oh how powerfully and yet beautifully expressed on heartbreak! .. Straight to the heart you bring the reader feel this! .. Beyond #'s! ..+++++++++++++++++

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Smoky Hoss 23 September 2022

Amazing power, pathos and pondering mixed in these incredible words. Great poem.

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Anjandev Roy 21 September 2022

.....that rust my soul......brilliant....

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Richard Wlodarski 20 September 2022

Such great depth of pain is conveyed in this heart-rending poem. My heart goes out to you, LeeAnn. The great love that you both shared was a beautiful gift to both of you. Cherish the gift...always...and get ready for brand new gifts! .

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