The snake slips out of its skin
but never changes
Its tongue makes me nervous
But it's harmless
Its teeth--the venom is
What you watch for
You're the snake that I fear now
My stomach pain increases
With the thought of yr love
Yr poison is yr tongue--and touch
And when I behead you
I will peel yr skin to find yr soul
And make a robe of vengence with it
Very well written about the betrayal and the revenge there after.. the snake analogy is excellent..very good write.
Betrayal, with venom in the teeth… Snake slips out of its skin, but never changes… because venom is in its soul… Fantastic poem, soulful. Top score, LeeAnn
I feel betrayal, disappointment, anger and vengeance embedded n this poem. Love betrayal can be very painful to generate vengeance. Beautiful poem
My late daddy ate snake meat during wartime, I was not born yet, he said it tastes like chicken meat. BTW An excellent poem, dear LeeAnn. TOP Marks!
Believe me. I know people like this. / I will peel yr skin to find yr soul / And make a robe of vengence with it / Unfortunately in real life we seldom get the chance to do this. Great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poem deals with true emotions of a lover who betrays and keep doing again and again. The only way to get rid is to pierce through and keep safe distance. A thought provoking poem, Full *******