Anderson Dccclxxviii Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Anderson Dccclxxviii

Rating: 5.0


Yr kiss burns my mouth
Like the last shot of tequila, I had last night
As yr saliva scorches my throat
Yr warmth has become a bad omen
I should've seen the warning signs
But I was too drunk to care
How did I manage to get home?
My head has a bee buzzing around in it
And even with my eyeglasses on,
Everything's a blur
As I saw you naked in my bed
My G-d! Did we sleep together?
That's one way of deflowering me

Thursday, March 2, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: alcohol,blind love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 02 March 2023

....... deflowering me.... significant....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2023

A fantastic poem dear poetess LeeAnn......well penned!

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Nosheen Irfan 04 March 2023

A passionate love is always blind. The real challenge is to make the passion last. A meaningful write on the complexities of love and passion.

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Nabakishore Dash 03 March 2023

exciting poem of love in which alcohol is a nuicense.

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Love, passion…. What is the borderline separating the two? Where do we start? To where? Nice poem, LeeAnn. Top score.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2023

A wonderful and interesting poem on love and the effects of alcohol. A well expressed and crafted write.

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