Angel(2) Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Angel(2)

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Today is the saddest day for you
And this night is dreadful too
Ha! I've found it in your eyes
Look and feel the waves of my heart
Forsake! the rippling of your pain
At the brink of my heart's den
You sleep well on my sapphire bosom
My heart is a prism made of love
Let the beam of my heart's moonlight,
Awake colourful dreams in your dark-night
Oh, my sweet angel sleep well
In the dreams of my heart for ever
Where no one will come to affright you.

Tuesday, December 27, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: angel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cristina Teodor 07 January 2012

Great poem, i like the way how you play with metaphors creating a fantastiqc perception of human bond with the universe..Cristina Teodor

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Ahmed Khaled 05 January 2012

Making nice images inside the consumer of your poems reflections is always one of your subspecialities in such an artistic splendid field you've got many of the best in and out, thank you alot leading me to your glowing paintings and vivid profound colours, my dear friend, allove, allgoodwishes

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Eric Cockrell 05 January 2012

beautiful poem, beautiful intent!

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Ifedayo Oshin 05 January 2012

good love poem... expressed from a good angle. it reads like Shakespare. keep it up!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 05 January 2012

This is a very lovely piece.

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Rajkamal P.j 23 October 2012

a classical treat indeed. it's great...keep writing

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Anjali Menon 17 January 2012

woooow its really lovely.......your style of writing and the feel is really commendable.....keep writing more poems like this

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Dead Rose 09 January 2012

Hey, , will you be my valentine? Amazing.................................10****** Rose.

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Bojael F.S 08 January 2012

What a delightful painting, colored with words.

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Payal Parande 07 January 2012

its lovely......................................................................................................................................

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