beth allinson

Rookie (1992 / norfolk)

Angel - Poem by beth allinson

Little hands and little feet.
Soft little body and silky hair.
Saucer sized blue eyes.
Perfect little pout.
A smile to melt even the coldest ice.
A piercing cry, we're up all night.
The softest giggle, you're our
Angel delight.


Comments about Angel by beth allinson

  • (4/2/2009 5:08:00 PM)

    its a good poem it obviously has meaning to you ^_^ i like it (Report)Reply

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  • (3/30/2009 5:15:00 AM)

    good work
    i like it
    take care and keep on working
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  • (3/27/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    Sweet poem...
    But I think you should continue it...
    ^-^
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  • (3/25/2009 8:02:00 AM)

    this is my favourite of your poems. its such a delight to read. am adding this to my favourites lists. good work.10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Daniel Hooks (3/23/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    A sweet little love poem I think you should go all out and make it longer though! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/23/2009 7:56:00 AM)

    nice

    angel is beautiful
    white...
    wise...
    honest...

    keep on your great work!
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  • (3/23/2009 7:06:00 AM)

    wow! nice one! nice piece with full of imagery! two thumbs up! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/22/2009 8:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful description of a parent's love for their child. Good write. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    its great...and you managed to describe all that with such little words....


    WRITE ON
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  • Barry A. Lanier (3/20/2009 9:56:00 AM)

    penning this 'angel in disguise' to perfection, , , , , , , , bravo (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2009 8:43:00 AM)

    How very sweetly done and filled with so much love with so few words... (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2009 8:02:00 AM)

    This is a very good poem. good concept and wording great job! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2009 4:31:00 AM)

    this is beautiful
    well done

    xx
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  • (3/19/2009 5:05:00 PM)

    i love the imagery, could actually visualize the cuteness lol. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/19/2009 4:00:00 PM)

    Take lots of pictures and then scrapbook them! ! You can include your poems on the pages! Nice work!
    Hugs,
    Dee
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  • (3/19/2009 3:29:00 PM)

    Ah yes. That's what they all are at that age. One of the true joys of life.
    A good subject for a short piece like this one. The kind of thing you will
    treasure later on as well. A memory captured.

    GW62
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  • (3/19/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    Similair to my 'Goodnight Baby Love' Nice to hear from someone so near to me.My husband worked in Norwich for nine months in the late seventies. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/19/2009 11:27:00 AM)

    very nice! great discription! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/19/2009 8:40:00 AM)

    nice poem and nice description of a angel... (Report)Reply

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  • (3/19/2009 7:29:00 AM)

    this is rather good beth. i like them short myself! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 19, 2009



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