Angels Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Angels

Rating: 4.4


Where do the angels stay?
In the large house, across the bay
My morsels come from them

What do the angels say?
Nothing, they keep talking on phone,
To someone at the other end
Ogling someone else.

What do the angels do?
Attend page 3 parties, whole night
Through.

Why god made angels?
I have no time and mood to think
I am hungry sir.

Can you be an angel too?
Every one is, only some are richer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 28 July 2009

Your words paint a poignant picture. At least in the mind of this reader. Warm regards, Sandra

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Meggie Gultiano 29 July 2009

well, this is nicely written. thanks for sharing

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Rakesh Bedi 31 July 2009

A rich thought/richly expressed/to enrich the readers! ! !

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Miriam Maia Padua 31 July 2009

beautiful thoughts.. heart-warming... I feel angels everywhere 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Marilyn Lott 31 July 2009

An interesting tale about Angels in your own unique style. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 April 2020

Very interesting. Food for thought... a different angle.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 September 2018

This piece reminds me of the Samaratins.

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Jake Shelvey 30 December 2009

Love this poem, well done, portraying angels in a modern form!

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Angel's lyre 11 August 2009

very good! I liked it

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Siddharth Singh 11 August 2009

Hahaha! Only some are richer... Very nicely done.

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