Aspiration Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Aspiration

Rating: 5.0


Pleasing as her smile is
Eyes shine evermore
Her hugs tell you a story
She dreams ever more
Can’t take defeat as a word
Aims high, flies high a free bird
Not for her the routine, she leads life
In her own scheme, she is the point
That belittles the extreme

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 28 July 2009

Aspirations brighten up the life, but we shouln't be unaware of its other side, the despair. CP

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Bele Lele 28 July 2009

this is a great poem .a bit short but you said what you had to in thoes lines well done!

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Rakesh Bedi 28 July 2009

Nikunj, i enjoyed it; brilliant!

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Sandra Fowler 28 July 2009

What a warm and admiring tribute to a woman who aspires to be the best that she can be. Applause for her. Kind regards, Sandra

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Meggie Gultiano 29 July 2009

well done..a nice piece.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 August 2009

Her every action gets a reaction from you it seems, then again is that not love.. :) 10

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 August 2009

Wow...excellent free flowing thought process....exceleent expression too....10++

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Subroto Chatterjee 03 August 2009

Ah, woman power at last....She rocks.... Cheers. Subroto

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Deborah Cromer 02 August 2009

Such ruling power. Not taking defeat as a word is very strong willed. Aspiration must be Queen? :) DC

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Gitaanjali Naidu 31 July 2009

Not for her the routine, she leads life In her own scheme, she is the point That belittles the extreme these lines are really touching and inspiring. great work

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