Angels Anticipations Poem by Angelic(Annie) Female

Angels Anticipations

Rating: 4.9

Alone, under clouded skies and darkness;
An angel awaits her knight in gloom,
Her cloak of white laced, tinsels sparkle;
To the silvery outlined puffed up moon.

Her delicate wings of satins finest silk;
Displayed like white winter plumage,
Her curled and lengthy golden locks;
Floats across her wandering visage.

She’s waiting for her lovers return;
He fights the mighty demons of lucifer,
Her lips are pouted pink in prayer;
For her loves safe guidance at war.

This beautiful angel is me, your Juliet;
The handsome knight is you, Romeo,
Return safely, it is only for you that I fret;
My love on you, forever I’ll bestow.

Anjali Sinha 03 June 2009

wowwwwwww romeo and juliet spun around comic creatures from heaven good write ----

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Lady Grace 03 June 2009

a different kind of romeo and juliet loves story..i like the last stanza..grace

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 May 2009

wow..that was soo very beautiful and romantic....well i m waiting for my fairy fact I found her, but now she is gone....gone forever, .. really enjoyed this one..nice narrative..A+++

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Faran Khalid 31 May 2009

Good keep it uo 10 pluss

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Reshma Ramesh 31 May 2009

wait for the prince.............every girl's dream...well penned

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Surya . 24 June 2009

a beautifull and heart touching love song voted 10 surya

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~ Jon London ~ 14 June 2009

A very beautiful Honest prayer of the heart...expressed so tenderly it whispers to the readers heart....Life can be such a wonderful love of its own...

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Alen Alexander 09 June 2009

lol, the part of bestowing your love was doubted by me, but then yeah! it does happen! nice poem!

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Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009

beautiful unselfish prayer for Love Eternal...very nicely you conveyed your theme Annie...thanks 10

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Vanita Thakkar 04 June 2009

Knight, Romeo and Juliet.... of Cyber era! ! Good poem.

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