Angels Living In Colorless Harmony Poem by Angelic(Annie) Female
Angels Living In Colorless Harmony
They have set my soul upon the skies
My fate has sent me with teary eyes
All i view are colorless rainbows
The angels too, have lost their shadows
There's suffering in every expression
But they're laughing at my exhibition
Wondering why, no place for sympathy
How would i survive this alone, emotionally
It's when i learnt why angels laugh and sing
To suppress the danger of enemies within
They believe, trust no one, none is worthy
Regardless of their bestowing harmony
No matter what we receive in suffering
Don't let the phase halt you from loving
Let compassion fill your hearts hollow
Happily you will live, these words just follow
Happily you will live, these words just follow, and i love the way the words flow and experss ur emotions, lovely poem
You establish a mellifluous rhythm from the onset, one that is pleasing to the Readers eye...Watch your word usage...''learned'', as opposed to ''learnt'' & Stanza 3/Line 3...didn't you mean to say ''no one''? Overall, commendable craftsmanship. F j R 2010
Rich in feeling, clear diction and ofcourse a very good subject. Somewhat similar to thoughts I tried to express in THE SLOW DEATH OF A BARD and PLASTIC FACES.
Happy and positive summimg up in the final stanza. A classic piece of art, great poetry. CP
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
9/22/2023 2:49:19 AM # 1.0.0.1113
I wana be some one like constantine..fighting evil...or even some one like van helsing fighting deomon...do u knoiw da best super power they have..love10++++