Angels Living In Colorless Harmony Poem by Angelic(Annie) Female

Angels Living In Colorless Harmony

Rating: 4.9

They have set my soul upon the skies
My fate has sent me with teary eyes
All i view are colorless rainbows
The angels too, have lost their shadows

There's suffering in every expression
But they're laughing at my exhibition
Wondering why, no place for sympathy
How would i survive this alone, emotionally

It's when i learnt why angels laugh and sing
To suppress the danger of enemies within
They believe, trust no one, none is worthy
Regardless of their bestowing harmony

No matter what we receive in suffering
Don't let the phase halt you from loving
Let compassion fill your hearts hollow
Happily you will live, these words just follow

Shashendra Amalshan 10 May 2009

I wana be some one like constantine..fighting evil...or even some one like van helsing fighting u knoiw da best super power they have..love10++++

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Reshma Ramesh 10 May 2009

inspiring write..........well done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 May 2009

Cool lovely love poem, love it with 10.

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Mohammed Albalushi 10 May 2009

Happily you will live, these words just follow, and i love the way the words flow and experss ur emotions, lovely poem

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Afzal Hussain 05 May 2009

Beautiful and so well said.....

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 January 2010

You establish a mellifluous rhythm from the onset, one that is pleasing to the Readers eye...Watch your word usage...''learned'', as opposed to ''learnt'' & Stanza 3/Line 3...didn't you mean to say ''no one''? Overall, commendable craftsmanship. F j R 2010

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 May 2009

Rich in feeling, clear diction and ofcourse a very good subject. Somewhat similar to thoughts I tried to express in THE SLOW DEATH OF A BARD and PLASTIC FACES.

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Roshni D'Souza 27 May 2009

Really nice piece...enjoyed it!

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Obinna Eruchie 21 May 2009

that is a beautiful piece.

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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2009

Happy and positive summimg up in the final stanza. A classic piece of art, great poetry. CP

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