Anonymous.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan


Rating: 5.0

A long walk through this imaginable forest
of strong firmest regulations of passions
and inflections of inflictions of literary superlatives
I adore your artistic poetic additionals.

Wherever this revival ends,
though coldest atmospheres
and blurred skies,
there is always a home embraced with love,
care and assurance
God's Blessings in Abundance.

This tremendous treat
of abnormality and humanity

in rural retreat
I stumbled endlessly
on drunkards most shameless repeat
hopeless and futureless this inhumanity.

So help me, Lord
release me of this drunkard's loveless care
in our societal welfare
who wears your clothes
shouting your love
while harming your most wonderful vicinity
mumbling shameless of Thy Trinity
covering drunkard's insanity
begging endlessly mountain filled amounts of drinks
in name of Thy Trinity

forgive me, Lord
if I name it shameless stupidity
of just one abnormal drunken evil implement
so help me Lord, release me of this at least
I am in the belly of the beast!

©Sylvia Frances Chan
AD. Monday the 1st of October 2018
@ 15.21 hrs. PM West-European Time.

Monday, October 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,drunkard,drunkenness,evil,god
This drunkard has a name, but we call him Anonymous, since he loves God and goes to church, but on the other hand he uses the money of that church through a head of that church a sister Toast, odd name that TOAST, who helps him getting his alcoholic drinks and he does not pay back anything, since he has zero money. I was shocked that he uses almost all the church´s money only to buy his alchoholic drinks. Many times the city police-corps put him in a police cell. Then released again after some time. He is constantly lying, but he still sleeps in the church at the expenses of the church. This poem is about these awful occurrences.
M Asim Nehal 19 November 2018

I hope better sense will prevail finally, a great poem, no less than 10 for it.

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Thank you so much, dear Asim, that drunkard is a man and the head of that RC church is a woman, so she cannot fight alone, and she got no assistance from the church but the money that she gave him to buy his alchoholic drinks are for the orphans who live from the church. Really shameless.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2018

Giving full marks..10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 November 2018

Thank YOU, Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. Thank you so much for the full marks too. G.B.U. in Abundance, thee and thy family. Amen.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2018

This tremendous treatment of love and care heals abnormality and gives shining effect to humanity. We offer prayer and God forgives us. God's Blessings in Abundance and our care is guaranteed. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 October 2018

Thank you so much having read this poem, Sir, the problem is still going on and on. It is a RC church and the head of the church is too lazy to make him truly sober. Now the head is a woman, that sister Toast and the previous head of that church, a man, is not working anymore ever since.

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Kostas Lagos 01 October 2018

Familiar situation. Sadly. Nice poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 October 2018

Indeed, Kostas, thank you so much for dropping here at my poem site. Your comment, compliment and visit are most appreciated. GBU in abundance.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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