Another Poem For Mothers Poem by Erin Belieu

Another Poem For Mothers

Rating: 4.9


Mother, I'm trying
to write
a poem to you—

which is how most
poems to mothers must
begin—or, What I've wanted
to say, Mother...but we
as children of mothers,
even when mothers ourselves,

cannot bear our poems
to them. Poems to
mothers make us feel

little again. How to describe
that world that mothers spin
and consume and trap

and love us in, that spreads
for years and men and miles?
Those particular hands that could

smooth anything: butter on bread,
cool sheets or weather. It's
the wonder of them, good or bad,

those mother-hands that pet
and shape and slap,
that sew you together
the pieces of a better house
or life in which you'll try
to live. Mother,

I've done no better
than the others, but for now,
here is your clever failure.

Tuesday, April 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 07 April 2015

Clever indeed, Erin. I think we all know the feeling and the frustration of wanting to express ourselves to our mothers, but words are stick figures. Thanks for sharing

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M Asim Nehal 10 December 2016

To write someone so close we do fumble with words to suit our true feelings and emotions.,

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 03 January 2017

A nice poem for the mother. Congratulations on poem of the day. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Tom Allport 03 January 2017

no amount of words can say? I love you mam, well maybe 4 words would do?

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 January 2017

She is the epitome of love and care. Without her life seems barren and dry. So beautiful...

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 20 June 2021

Mother's hands are the way of life for every child in childhood life- great poem penned about Mother

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 June 2021

A heartfelt write beautifully expressed.

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Bharati Nayak 18 June 2021

How to describe that world that mothers spin and consume and trap and love us in, that spreads for years and men and miles? Those particular hands that could smooth anything: butter on bread, --------A great poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 June 2021

Congratulations being The MOdern Poem Of The Day, perfect poem to read and much enjoyed the words created here with finest feel.5 Stars!

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 July 2020

those mother-hands that pet and shape and slap, that sew you together the pieces of a better house or life- a mother whose love and care built us all up in love. tony

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Erin Belieu

Erin Belieu

Ohama / Nebraska
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