Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 21,595 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Anticipation Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

The grape vine rises

then bends towards apple flowers

I wait to quench thirst


Comments about Anticipation Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Lillian Thomas (8/15/2009 5:03:00 AM)

    this is the best of your haiku I have read so far. keep it up. (Report)Reply

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  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (3/5/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    that gave the real taste of wine (Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (2/26/2009 10:49:00 AM)

    superb write........................... (Report)Reply

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (10/23/2008 12:13:00 PM)

    This is perfect.......just so nice. I liked it..............10 (Report)Reply

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/13/2008 8:17:00 PM)

    Dorothy after I got your coment on y e-mail i went this haiku and recounted.it does follow the 5-7-5 syllable count.Thanks for the ten. (Report)Reply

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  • Dorothy- A. HolmesDorothy- A. Holmes (10/13/2008 6:43:00 PM)

    Lorraine,

    A lovely haiku. I notice you don't follow the 5-7-5 rule..10 from me!

    Dorothy
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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/10/2008 12:24:00 AM)

    short and sweet....good (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (9/23/2008 8:55:00 PM)

    good imagery on passionate love, Lorraine...i liked 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Tj Becker (9/21/2008 7:25:00 PM)

    I love haiku form, what a challenge to write some thing amazing in so few words. You have done that well. You have captured nature and painted a picture for us. Well done. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 9, 2008



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